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Owl Cube Messenger Bagby ~EST0PPEL

Design Challenges / Cubism

Finally finished! This is the first time that I've entered a DA contest and I worked really hard on this design. I've not done a lot of cubism, but I went with the barn owl because it's face lends itself to cubism quite well.

I really hope I can win...I could use a new computer (my lovely current desk top is wonderful, but is from 2003...and starting to go unfortunately...).

If you like my design, please click "I WANT THIS" located below the 'add to favs' button

Critique by ~Kazimstar Jun 17, 2012, 11:41:38 AM

This piece is very diverse. Whilst following the impressionistic guidelines of the variation of perspective, this piece remains subjective. Despite the expressed curvature within the feathers, appropriate segments have been outlined and they certainly add a simple, but effective emphasis. I cannot say that this was the first/ only piece which portrays a bird, but the colour and bird type certainly are original. I would have to say though, There are too many curved lines, and not enough shape jittering. This is probably due to the outline. There isn't a sense of fragmentism. Also, having the bird being portrayed in the same shape as the bag is very effective. Very nice vision, but I reckon, could be more effective. I have scored you relatively low on technique due to lack of fragmentism and the natural curvature. Well done overall, this is a great piece, and you have based it on the task very well.

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~DasTenna Dec 31, 2012

Interesting design.

~EST0PPEL Dec 31, 2012

thanks. it was a LOT of fun and a great challenge

~DasTenna Jan 3, 2013

You´re welcome.

*sweetmarly Jul 9, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Congratulations...your bag is in the semi-finals....YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally something that I vote on gets into the semi-finals.

~EST0PPEL Jul 9, 2012

D8 I just saw that and I'm stoked!! thank you for the support! couldn't have done it without such wonderful people

*ErinKerr Jun 18, 2012 Professional Traditional Artist

Oh wow! Love the kind of bird you picked for a messanger bag. (Totally adores Owls *____*) I so want to have a bag like this...the design is just awesome and very polished with that jazzy hit of colour with the destaturated greens. I wish you so much luck in the contest!

~EST0PPEL Jun 18, 2012

aww thank you so much ;w; you're so very welcome! I hope they announce the 100 finalists soon X_X

~Kazimstar Jun 17, 2012

Haha, I went for a bird too, guess yours is better tho

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~EST0PPEL Jun 17, 2012

thank you for the comment and the critique. I'll check out yours

~Kazimstar Jun 17, 2012

Awesome, thanks

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